Kia ora Amber, My name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms. Well done on creating this blogpost about your fantastic artwork! I really like the way you have designed your background to be dark with little patches of colour. This was such a clever and creative idea, so ka pai on your ingenuity! I see you have got yellow, orange, red and green in your artwork. Are there any other colours in which you have used? You mentioned how next time you would use more colours. When you say this do you mean ‘more colours’ as in additional colours, or ‘more colours’ as in less of a dark background and more brightness? I see you have got some writing on your artwork. As the writing is quite small, I am unable to read it. Perhaps you could edit this blogpost and include your writing so all of your viewers can see what you have created. The image of you on your artwork is so cool, and I cannot believe how life-like it looks! Did you draw this image, or is it a photo? This is such a fantastic post! Keep up the excellent effort! Nga mihi
Hi Amber! I remember seeing you create your art when I was in Tui class. What art are you doing at home? Isn't it funny how your face on your painting is looking up at your face! What books are you reading now? I am looking forward to seeing you back at school and listening to some of your stories. Mrs Phelps
Kia ora Amber,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms.
Well done on creating this blogpost about your fantastic artwork! I really like the way you have designed your background to be dark with little patches of colour. This was such a clever and creative idea, so ka pai on your ingenuity!
I see you have got yellow, orange, red and green in your artwork. Are there any other colours in which you have used?
You mentioned how next time you would use more colours. When you say this do you mean ‘more colours’ as in additional colours, or ‘more colours’ as in less of a dark background and more brightness?
I see you have got some writing on your artwork. As the writing is quite small, I am unable to read it. Perhaps you could edit this blogpost and include your writing so all of your viewers can see what you have created.
The image of you on your artwork is so cool, and I cannot believe how life-like it looks! Did you draw this image, or is it a photo?
This is such a fantastic post! Keep up the excellent effort!
Nga mihi
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DeleteHi Amber! I remember seeing you create your art when I was in Tui class. What art are you doing at home? Isn't it funny how your face on your painting is looking up at your face! What books are you reading now? I am looking forward to seeing you back at school and listening to some of your stories.
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